צנזר, צנזר

החיים קצרים, ובאנגלית – כפי שכבר ציינתי בעבר – המסר דווקא עובר טוב יותר אם מקצרים ומפשטים את הניסוח.

הנה, אם כן, כמה דוגמאות לביטויים נפוצים שניתן וכדאי ברוב המקרים לקצר לתחליף קצר ו׳רזה׳ יותר:

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